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Things were never quite the same as they had been before we had gone to the Leroux Manor. Many things had changed in the little amount of days over the ...

I like it! Hey you're new...sorry i haven't welcomed you yet. Welcome! Anyways, like nate said it's short but good. I hope there will be more to read. Great job ...

Thanx for the cheesy part sam! j/k i thought so too and wanted to see if anyone agreed. If i had known you thought so sooner i would have changed ...

Good job Sam! Nice star wars line...i was thinking the same thing about luke i am your father. Anyways i think the story is going very well and of course ...

Matthew had defiantly changed who I was. Not just the outside but inside as well. I was no longer the happy, outgoing flirt that everyone loved. The day he had ...

LOL LOL LOL!!! No my x box! Matthew: Mary Jane, do not play with my x-box without permission again. Mary Jane: But, Matthew, I just- Matthew: No, no playing with ...

Welcome Empress Kat! I'm Kay Kay and hope you have a fun time here! Hey we seemed to be alot alike with the typing and the horrible movie thing. See ...

“We are going to have to change her identity now that she is one of us,” Rolf insisted to Matthew. “I know that,” he responded, quietly. “I am married to ...

Good job Yoshi! I liked it. Really i did. The only things i saw that didnt' seem to fit was using the word reduce and the paragraph before the last ...

It's not really something i'm into but i'll help the best i can. I found a few spelling errors and punctuation that you might want to go back and fix. ...

I liked it. It sounds like me when i'm bored and just thinking about what to write. I've written stuff in my room trying to get an inspiration and what ...

You want to know an annoying commercial? The geico commericals...if i even spelled thta right. They are so freaking stupid and make me want to throw something at the tv. ...

Hey Cal! Welcome to YWS. I hope you have fun here!

I agree with Eleanor too. Anyways, in my opinion it ended kind of fast and that the end was too brief. My favorite part though was: Once it was injected ...

When I awoke at dawn, it took me a couple of minutes to figure out why I had awaken in the floor without any clothing on and in the arms ...